Friday, October 7, 2011

[sour apple / surt æble]

another sour apple -
I resort to the tactics
of the scorched mind

endnu et surt æble -
jeg tyr til det brændte sinds taktik

this is an example of how the two languages may result in a difference in the form of the haiku. I try to use Danish as close to the spoken language as possible, so breaking up the second line would seem awkward.

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